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Fallen by ~Blytz:iconBlytz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




I am now dry
no emotion to show
tired of this life
and taking every blow

it's taken my all
to get where I am today
and yet that's all it needd
to change my world gray

I've run out
of needle and thread
I can no longer stitch
the wounds that have bled

My heart's so complex
not JUST worries and cares
if you can't find the door
'climb in through the tears

it's taken a toll
as the years have gone by
I'm a wondering soul
who doesn't know how to fly

So will you take the challenge
to stitch up these things
will you be my Angel
and help me, be my wings
©2004-2009 ~Blytz
:iconblytz:

Author's Comments

Okay Umm..... yeah I've actually written alot of poetry but this is the only one I wish to put up here. I may put up the other ones later but I really don't feel like putting them up. ^^;

Preview image by: `jezebel
Poem by: me

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~liliths-art Sep 12, 2004, 10:20:15 AM
:O WOW! I LOVE IT! It's so beutiful ; ; :clap:

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I've been here for about 5 years, and I don't even have a crappy T-shirt. :(
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~liliths-art Sep 12, 2004, 10:20:55 AM
And I misspelled beAutiful! xD Sorry, but I do -love- the piece @.@ +fav

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I've been here for about 5 years, and I don't even have a crappy T-shirt. :(
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=Elfdaughter Sep 12, 2004, 10:23:29 AM
That's good. It flows, but in a strange way, which fits the genre of the poem. The last stanza is very good - and I love the use of imagery. 10/10.

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My Stock: [link]

When he who has killed a unicorn proves himself to be pure of heart, the unicorn will live again.
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~sheebah Sep 12, 2004, 10:23:29 AM
wow! this is wonderful! you are very talented both in writing and in art!

Sheebs~*

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"I laughed, then I cried. Then i laughed with tears coming out of my mouth!"
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~Blytz Sep 12, 2004, 10:48:39 AM
lol^^ thank you! I never would've noticed you mispelling it if you hadn't said anything! again thank you so much for the fav! I feel so loved.

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"They tell me not to give in to love; that in the end someone gets hurt. But they forgot that love is e.n.d.l.e.s.s.."

I am the silencer of the grumbling tummies.
Believe it.
It's true.
:)
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~Blytz Sep 12, 2004, 10:51:10 AM
wow thanks. ^^

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"They tell me not to give in to love; that in the end someone gets hurt. But they forgot that love is e.n.d.l.e.s.s.."

I am the silencer of the grumbling tummies.
Believe it.
It's true.
:)
:iconblytz:
~Blytz Sep 12, 2004, 10:52:22 AM
yeah I thought so too on the flow being strange. I didn't really think this is that great but I guess it gets the job done, thank you! ^^

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"They tell me not to give in to love; that in the end someone gets hurt. But they forgot that love is e.n.d.l.e.s.s.."

I am the silencer of the grumbling tummies.
Believe it.
It's true.
:)
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~reDs-- Sep 12, 2004, 12:24:13 PM
really pretty, and nice flow. I can relate.

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Life sucks, I know. I just say it in a much more eloquent way
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~Inconspicuous54 Sep 12, 2004, 1:35:52 PM
wow, faith, that's really amazing. mad props girl.

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"Speak lightly and with feeling-
My ears are an empty glass,
And your words, the richest nectar."
- ~Kame

"bare-knuckles bleeding a stylish red
we keep our mouths shut
and scream silence instead." - ~Slaneyder
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~Saphiire Sep 12, 2004, 2:55:37 PM
O_o woaholy.. t...this is amazing... *faves*
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